Valentine's Day is a love day of 14
February every year. In the Valentine's Day, The woman gives the chocolate hand
make for the boyfriend. The man gives the roses for the girlfriend because the
roses is the symbol in Valentine's Day. This year, on 14 February is Makha Bucha
Day. Makha Bucha Day is the Buddhist important religious day.
In the morning, my boyfriend and I go to
the temple for make merit and let the fishes. I'm happy. I don't have the chocolate for him, but I
make some video for him. I choose the pictures and song for make the video. It
is difficult. I don't know how to the video. I ask my friends about how to the
video. They don't know how to the video. I try to learn about make the video. I
download program make the video in the telephone. It is easy. I make the video 5
minutes. After that, I post the video in the Facebook and tag the video to
boyfriend. I'm pleased the video. Surprise!! My boyfriend make the picture for
me. I'm happy.
Valentine's Day is not important for me.
I think, every day is the love day. I love him. I know, him love I too.
I think your love is very cute. your text is interesting. The grammar is good. I think last sentence should change it....him love me too.
ตอบลบIn my opinion,you should write in past tense but your story is interesting.
ตอบลบI like your task.When I read,I felt sentimental.Your boyfriend and you is so cute.^ ^
In my point of view, you feel happy, enjoy with your boyfriend and it is special day for you. Using tense is good but last sentence you should check sentence or change it better. (^_^)
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